Rough Cut - Feedback

When creating the rough cut to our Thriller opening, we asked for teacher feedback in order to improve and evaluate our work in which we have done so far.

Things which need to be improved on:


- Add additional clips/ film on another day in order to strengthen our Thriller piece including close ups to make it more dynamic. 
- Shorten the scene where the antagonist is driving, delivering the mysterious package/ shorten some of the lengths of clips over 5 seconds.

- Get rid of the zoom of the package and find a clip of the same scene without the effect of zoom.