Final product and comparison of original and own product

 

 This is our final product for our remake of collateral.

We converted our editing piece from final cut pro into quicktime so that we could post it on blogger.

Our scene is about two females walking towards each other. They appear as if they have accidentally bumped into each other, but it was intentionally so they could do a bag swap.

The scene ends with the character Annie at the top of the staircase mysteriously looking at the camera to dramatize the scene. She then walks off followed by a dissolve.  

This is from the collateral original scene which is similar to ours. We have a close up of Annie in the beginning so that the audience know that she is one of the protagonists. 

Comparison of original

to our remake

This is an extreme close up. Audience feel closer to character  and are immediately attached to him. This camera shot demonstrates  that he is the protagonist. The prop of the sunglasses connote that he is trying to hide his identity.

This is a two shot of both characters bumping into each other. 
This camera shot indicates that the two are connected.
They appear as if they have accidentally bumped into each other, but this is intentional.  

This is a close up of the iconic prop of the bag being picked up. There is a close up to present to the audience that a switch has been made.

This is similar to the collateral opening as both protagonists meet at one point.
This two shot indicates that the two characters are connected.

This is an extreme close-up of Annie she looks suspicious.
The effect of this camera shot is to make the audience feel attached  to her, and
recognize her as the protagonist.

This is a high angle shot of the character Annie
picking up the iconic prop of the bag.
This is similar to the collateral opening as a bag swap is
made from character Christabell to Annie.